Its very good!...From all the posts Ive read, the only word that seems misplaced is the word ""seeking". You probably want to you the word "searching" instead.- my english is poor -
Example: "Ive been searching for the answer."
"Ive been searching for the right words."
Other than that, I couldnt tell. Anyone speaking 2 languages is very impressing. Adding the ability to fluently write and speak 2 has probably surpassed 95% of our worlds population.